Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice
Now a days
the world has become so Correct the word
Nowadays
compitive
about some matters. Getting a good Correct your spelling
competitive
job
is one
of them. Some people opine that the salary
is the most important in their job
but others think that the job
what they did is the most important. I think both of the sides is important for being lead a well
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good
life
. In this
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essay
easy
eassy
I will give my stance below the paragraphs.
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,eassy
Firstly
, job
is Add an article
the job
a job
most
important Correct article usage
the most
things
for human
being. Anyone who Add an article
a human
the human
do
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does
the
better Change the article
a
job
has been treated a
Change preposition
as a
prestigeous
person in society. Though in the private sector there are a lot of Correct your spelling
prestigious
oppertunities
to do but still have some trouble to face it. Correct your spelling
opportunities
For instance
, one
individual who work Change preposition
for one
at
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in
private
office or bank he has to work from 9 am to Add an article
the private
a private
till
9 pm it is really devastating for him, but he earns Change preposition
apply
good
Add an article
a good
salary
. So, salary
is important for him. Earning a better salary
is good for one
individual's basic needs. Such
as, he could direct his family very well,can give a
proper education to his children, can afford his dream house ,can go anywhere, and Remove the article
apply
also
give soupport
to his family members during illness. Correct your spelling
support
However
, in any job
salary
is the ultimate things
. Without good
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a good
salary
no Add a comma
,salary
one
can sustain in any job
. It is a basic needs
for Change the noun form
need
human
being.
Add an article
a human
the human
On the other hand
, in many govt
. job
, salary
is not so important. The previllage
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privilege
one
govt
. officer
gets is important. Add an article
the officer
an officer
Usually
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,Usually
it's depend
on the Change the verb form
it depends
catagory
of Correct your spelling
category
job
. Who works on Correct article usage
the job
govt
. sector think that salary
is not a cup of cake. Doing a govt
. job
is prestigeous
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prestigious
things
.They could get a retirement allowance after the end of their job
and they would highly satisfied with that.
To conclude, I beleive
that, Correct your spelling
believe
one
who do
not do Change the verb form
does
job
can not lead a prosperous Add an article
the job
life
. Hence
, job
is most important in Add an article
the job
a job
one
's life
and salay
is the ultimate Correct your spelling
salary
things
for laeading
a good Correct your spelling
leading
life
circle. Job
itself and Add an article
The job
salary
both are very important from there different aspects.Submitted by rothee277 on
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