You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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Dear friend, I am writing

this

letter to share my problem with you. As I had arranged a plan to visit you in Canada but I have an important event at a home

that is

really important to attend. My family has fixed the marriage date of my sister in the

month when I had a plan to come to see you.

This

hugely

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important part of my life. I really apologize for

this

situation that, I can not come to Canada to see you at that time.

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extremely sorry for you. I know that we made a lot of

plan

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to do some activities and visits some important places. But you know how compulsory to attend that marriage because family is

also

an important part of our lives. I would like to fix a new date to come to see you. I will definitely come after the sister wedding and I will spend quality time with you. we will enjoy and visit some places together. your friend Gurpreet

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

172 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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