You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of your study plans • explain why you want to get a part-time job • suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Frank, I have good news that I am enrolled in your college as a full-time student, and I am coming to your city to live nearby you. I will pursue my office administration executive diploma from 7 November 2021 to 31 December 2022. You are living there for 2 years and I am quite sure that you have some contacts with locals as well as with employers. I hope you will help me to get a part-time
job
because as you know, I have no relative there, so I have to live on my own. To pay my all bills, I will need a decent part-time
job
over there.
Last
time, when you wrote me a letter, you mentioned that you have employed by Tim-Horton’s restaurant as a supervisor. I need you to write me a reference letter to your manager regarding my
job
. In
this
way, the recruiting manager will consider me as a trustworthy candidate for the
job
. I wish you good luck with your career and take care of your health. Lots of love, Dilpreet

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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