You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of your study plans • explain why you want to get a part-time job • suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Frank, I have good news that I am enrolled in your college as a full-time student, and I am coming to your city to live nearby you. I will pursue my office administration executive diploma from 7 November 2021 to 31 December 2022. You are living there for 2 years and I am quite sure that you have some contacts with locals as well as with employers. I hope you will help me to get a part-time

job

because as you know, I have no

relative

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there, so I have to live on my own. To pay my all bills, I will need a decent part-time

job

over there.

Last

time, when you wrote me a letter, you mentioned that you have

employed

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by Tim-Horton’s restaurant as a supervisor. I need you to write me a reference letter to your manager regarding my

job

. In

this

way, the recruiting manager will consider me as a trustworthy candidate for the

job

. I wish you good luck with your career and take care of your health. Lots of love, Dilpreet

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Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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