You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

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Dear colleagues, I hope
this
letter finds everyone well. Since we started working from home because of the pandemic, we haven't got a chance to meet. I am writing
this
letter to remind you about a beautiful day we spent
last
year and I want to say thanks for your love. On the occasion of my
first
marriage
anniversary
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I arranged a party at my home and it's been exactly one year for now. I can't express how happy I am after seeing you all at the party and I still remember the moment you surprised me with a
gift
. You guys presented me with a luxury tie with a
card
. I was so emotional when I saw that
card
and
gift
and I am extremely thankful for your love I love you guys presented me. I know it is an Armani
First
-Class which is so luxurious. Every time, I wear
the
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tie I get compliments from
the
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people and it reminds all of you. The
gift
card
you presented is so nice with the group picture of all our colleagues on top. Inside the
card
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it's the picture of me and my wife together.
That is
the best
gift
card
I received in my life. I hope we will start working together in our office soon. Thanks and regards Dheeraj
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