Write a letter to the train company’s head office. In your letter,  give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat  explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction  ask about what action will be taken to improve the service

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dear sir, madam

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am writing you

this

letter regarding the issues that

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faced during my journey.

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recently travelled to Toronto from Montreal on your train number 13.

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booked my ticket online and

ticket

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my ticket

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number was 56489751. my trip was just a one-way trip.

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travelled on January 24th 2021. my boarding time was 2:00pm. My

seat

number was 2 and it was just 1st

seat

on the right side at the entry gate. But,

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faced some difficulties during

this

trip.

actually

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the

seat

that your company offered me was not comfortable at all. it was

the

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wooden

seat

and I paid extra money for the

cusion

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cushion

seat

. And the train heater was working slow. I was feeling very cold inside the coach. I recommend you

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apply

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provide correct information on your website regarding seats and availability. There should be someone in the train coach that can address

this

kind of

issues

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issue

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on the spot. Thanks, Ravinder

Submitted by rav5883 on Wed Feb 24 2021

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12Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

161 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the train company’s head office. In your letter,  give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat  explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction  ask about what action will be taken to improve the service

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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