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nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. what are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children.

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There is no doubt that these days,
technology
 has played a vital role in adult
life
 and
also
 in
children
life
 too. The question is, what is the drawbacks and the benefits of using
technology
 through video
games
 by
children
. In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss both advantage and disadvantage. In terms of advantages,
children
 who play computer
games
 are more intelligent and capable of cope with new
technology
. Because of the type of computerized game,
the
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young people tend to switch between their fingers in quick moves which need high attention. The other advantage is that gaming does not take to much space in the house or room. In the other words, if we compare electronic
games
 with other
games
, we will find that electronic
games
 much smaller.
For example
, a
playstation
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PlayStation
 nowadays is a small gadget, so young people can play everywhere like in their own bedrooms.
However
, there are many disadvantages
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children
 who use video
games
.
Firstly
, the youngster who is playing PlayStation tends to gain weight
comparing
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 to active
children
which they
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who
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 are enjoying outdoor activity.
Secondly
, the gamers social
life
 is so limited,
thus
 they spend their time alone without any social activity.
Finally
,
this
 issue will affect the whole society and maybe the coming generations. In conclusion, it is evident that there is some disadvantage, but there are advantages that improve
children
life
, In order to enhance their ability to use
technology
. I do believe that video
games
 help
children
 to be smarter.
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