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Writing task 1 You recently broke your leg and your colleagues visited with 'get well soon' cards and presents. Write a letter to: 1. Thank them 2. Describe how you have been spending your time while recovering 3. Tell some other information about your recovery

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Dear everyone, I would like to thank every single one of you for all your supports through all the cards and presents as they mean the world to me during
this
 difficult and unexpected
time
. I have received and read them all and I could not be
further
 grateful to know that everyone has always got my back.
Fortunately
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this
time
 period has given me the chance, which I did not get before due to work, to spend
time
 on some readings and paintings as I always have desired to do. These hobbies give me
such
 a soothing and relaxing feeling and honestly help me use my
time
 more productively during recovery.
Good
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The good
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 news is that I am currently attending physiotherapy five days a week as I have started to be able to walk a few steps now. I am feeling much better now both physically and mentally thanks to all supports and helps from all the
staffs
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, families, and you guys as well. I will soon be able to discharge once I pass my rehabilitation test in the
next
 two months hopefully, which I will keep you guys updated
.
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 I miss everyone a lot and I am so looking forward to seeing all of you again soon. I hope you guys are all doing well and please take care. Yours sincerely,
Elty
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Ely
 Linyi.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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