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Teenagers have problems at home and school. What difficulties are they facing now? What should parents and schools do to help them?

#teenagers #home #school #difficulties #parents #schools
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 universally acknowledged fact that the upcoming generations are always considered to be as a nation builder. As teenage is
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 delicate and crucial period of everyone's life, one has to go through many hurdles at one's place and education institute.
However
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 effort of
parents
 and teachers are required to sort out these problems.
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 the problems and discuss the solutions in the following paragraphs with relevant examples. In
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contemporary years, there are two predominant difficulties, many children have to suffer.
First
 and foremost, the problem of suffering
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 depression that most of the juveniles go through. To elaborate, it is very common in many families that both
parents
 are working to earn bread and butter. Due to
this
 tendency, elders are not able to share time with their children
consequently
, youngsters feel very alone and depressed
moreover
, sometimes they keep them isolated as they think that there is no one who can understand them.
Secondly
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 of studies put detrimental effects on their minds and body.
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, a survey done on students suffering from peer pressure of getting success
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 shows every 1 out of 10 juveniles attempted suicide.
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Nevertheless
, with the combining efforts of
parents
 and school management, these issues could be solved.
To begin
 with the family, elder members of the family should try to take their time out, so that they can spend precious time with their young-ones and make
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 on various matters, a child is facing.
Furthermore
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 and the school staff should encourage students in a positive way and try to lower the burden of studies by using some interesting learning methods. To illustrate,
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BBC research shows that 70% of school goers enjoy their study when they have been taught by practical examples. To
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recapitulate
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although
 there are many hurdles face by many students,
parents
 and teachers can play a vital role in sorting out these issues, so that they can contribute in making children socially and responsible person of the country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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