n Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

It is becoming a trend in the United Kindom and most of the western countries that senior citizens are being sent to

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homes where the

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professionals provide

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to the individuals whilst the governing body of the nation have to spend a significant amount on

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amenities.

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ultra-challenging situation for the

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but it is the only place that can make them feel loved and psychologically stress-free as well as reduce the burden for the leadership. There are two vital factors why

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have to support their elders.

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home people are extremely despondent as they feel lonely without their

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.

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, the seniors will be feel abandoned as it will affect them psychologically . There have been incidents recorded that in some countries

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as India and Japan, people over 65 years live with their

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and grandchildren

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of old

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shelters which increase their

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considerably due to negligible psychological stress.

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, the

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should aid and abet their senior member as it will help

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a healthy family.

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, Governments in

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countries are already paying for the medical and

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of all

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groups including senior members. Old

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home and

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requires a significant amount of funding and are owned by private sectors.

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, a large segment of the population prefers private old

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home for their predecessors which make expansive bills for the government as these are included in Medicare and

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benefits. To exemplify, blah blah blah.

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homes along with medicare will be a burden on the budget of the government. To conclude, to my perspective,

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should provide

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to their old members. I firmly suggest that for the well being of grandparents there should be support from the household

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of the government.