Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that
Olympic
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the Olympic
games
can bring the
unity to all Correct article usage
apply
nations
. Others think that this
event
is not important and wastes money. It is a tendency to believe that international sport
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sports
games
are cost an
enormous money to organize the Remove the article
apply
event
. However
, I believe that there are several benefits of
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to
this
Olympic
event
.
According to the point of view, the international sport
Change the noun form
sports
games
such
as Olympic
games
, It is the big event
that happens once in
every four years. It cost a vast financial investment to hold Verify preposition usage
apply
this
event
. For example
, there is
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are
the
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apply
Olympic
games
in South Africa in 2010 and the governments have to rebuilt
many Change the verb
rebuild
sport
stadiums around the Change the noun form
sports
country
to hold the number of tourist around the world that attended the Olympic
games
. For some country
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,country
this
event
is kind of the reputation of the country
. This
is the reason why many country
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countries
spend
over a trillion dollars to organize Change the verb form
spends
this
event
while they could spend this
amount of money to improve the
society.
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apply
On the other hand
, there are various benefits happen
in Correct pronoun usage
that happen
Olympic
games
. For instance
, it can bring the
unity in each Correct article usage
apply
nations
to cheers their homeland competitors. Change to a singular noun
nation
This
can bring the
joyful moments to that Correct article usage
apply
country
when they are in the winner positions. Moreover
, this
event
encourage
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encourages
the
people from different Correct article usage
apply
nations
to be more generous to each others
as the Change to a singular noun
other
sport
roles are. Change the noun form
sports
Olympic
games
can impact on
the tourism trends in the Change preposition
apply
country
as well; there
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thereby
by
, the Change preposition
apply
economic
will increase from the tourist around the world that visit Replace the word
economy
to
the host Remove the preposition
apply
country
.
In conclusion, there are benefits and drawbacks of Olympic
Correct article usage
the Olympic
games
. In my opinion, I believed that this
event
should be happened
continuously. Change to the active voice
happen
have happened
Therefore
, the
joyful and unity can drive the happiness of people in every Remove the article
apply
nations
around the worldChange to a singular noun
nation
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