Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that

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games

can bring

the

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unity to all

nations

. Others think that

this

event

is not important and wastes money. It is a tendency to believe that international

sport

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games

are cost

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an enormous money to organize the

event

.

However

, I believe that there are several benefits

of

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this

Olympic

event

.

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the

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point of view,

the

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international

sport

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games

such

as

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the Olympic

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games

, It is the big

event

that happens once

in

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apply

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every four years. It cost a vast financial investment to hold

this

event

.

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, there

is

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the

Olympic

games

in South Africa in 2010 and the governments

have

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to

rebuilt

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many

sport

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sports

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stadiums around the

country

to hold the number of

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tourists

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tourist

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tourists

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around the world that attended the

Olympic

games

. For some

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countries

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country

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country,

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this

event

is kind of the reputation of the

country

.

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is the reason why many

country

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spend over a trillion dollars to organize

this

event

while

they could spend

this

amount of money to improve the society.

On the other hand

, there are various benefits happen in

Olympic

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the Olympic

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games

.

For instance

, it can bring

the

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unity in each

nations

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nation

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to

cheers

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their homeland competitors.

This

can bring

the

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joyful moments to that

country

when they are in the

winner

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positions.

Moreover

,

this

event

encourage

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the

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people from different

nations

to be more generous to each

others

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other

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as the

sport

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sports

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roles are.

Olympic

games

can impact

on

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the tourism trends in the

country

as well;

there by

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, the

economic

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will increase from the

tourist

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tourists

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around the world that visit to the host

country

. In conclusion, there are benefits and drawbacks

of

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to

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Olympic

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the Olympic

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games

. In my opinion, I

believed

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that

this

event

should be happened continuously.

Therefore

, the joyful and unity can drive the happiness of people in every

nations

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nation

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around the world