Some people believe that adults always do exercise and sports because of the major sports events that shown on T.V like the Olympic Games and Football World Cup. While others say that there are many other ways to encourage them to practice exercises other than T.V shows. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is an undeniable fact that
people
these days are more captivated towards
sports
to stay fit and healthy even in their older age by following their favourite players on televisions and
sports
matches;
however
, some think that there are myriad of other alternatives to perform better physical
activities
.
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but
also
my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs with relevant illustrations. The most conspicuous reason as to why a section of society holds a belief that
people
are keen towards major
sports
event
such
as football world cup and
olympics
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Olympics
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games
to remain healthy because these events persuade the followers and
people
try to imbibe the actions of their idols. Virat Kohli,
for example
, is an eminent player in cricket and his large number of fans follow him and stay fit by reciprocating his ideas on staying healthy.
Moreover
, these days every person has a connection of television in his home or
work place
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which is quite suitable for not only children but
also
for adults and older
people
from where they can learn various
activities
to
maintian
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maintain
their health status free of cost.
On the contrary
, the opponents advocate that
instead
of following
such
shows and players,
people
should have other
activities
. School and colleges conduct various
sports
events and allow students to participate in several
games
from their tender age so that they can inculcate the habit of
sports
to stay healthy for their entire life. To illustrate, there are
plethora
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of
sports
competitions held in the educational institutes on various levels which shows the importance of health in an individual's life.
Hence
, children
spends
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their leisure time in
such
games
and follow
this
till they get old. To conclude,
although
physical
activities
could be learnt from institutes
in
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early age as they develop deep interest, I believe that
people
follow their loved ones and imbibe them which is considered as a
heathy
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healthy
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copy when talking about health and fitness rather than children who are
complled
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compelled
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to play
games
by their teachers in the schools.
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