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Some people believe that adults always do exercise and sports because of the major sports events that shown on T.V like the Olympic Games and Football World Cup. While others say that there are many other ways to encourage them to practice exercises other than T.V shows. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is an undeniable fact that
people
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 these days are more captivated towards
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 to stay fit and healthy even in their older age by following their favourite players on televisions and
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 matches;
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, some think that there are myriad of other alternatives to perform better physical
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.
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view points
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 but
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people
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 are keen towards major
sports
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 event
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 as football world cup and
olympics
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games
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 to remain healthy because these events persuade the followers and
people
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 try to imbibe the actions of their idols. Virat Kohli,
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, is an eminent player in cricket and his large number of fans follow him and stay fit by reciprocating his ideas on staying healthy.
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, these days every person has a connection of television in his home or
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 which is quite suitable for not only children but
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 for adults and older
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 from where they can learn various
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 to
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maintain
 their health status free of cost.
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, the opponents advocate that
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 of following
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 shows and players,
people
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 should have other
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. School and colleges conduct various
sports
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 events and allow students to participate in several
games
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 from their tender age so that they can inculcate the habit of
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 to stay healthy for their entire life. To illustrate, there are
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 of
sports
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 competitions held in the educational institutes on various levels which shows the importance of health in an individual's life.
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, children
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 their leisure time in
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games
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 and follow
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 till they get old. To conclude,
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 physical
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 could be learnt from institutes
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 early age as they develop deep interest, I believe that
people
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 follow their loved ones and imbibe them which is considered as a
heathy
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healthy
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 copy when talking about health and fitness rather than children who are
complled
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compelled
compiled
 to play
games
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 by their teachers in the schools.
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