Travelling is one of the most popular recreational activities we have. Some people like to travel alone, while others like to travel with a group of people. What would you prefer, travelling alone or travelling with some people?

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different age and hobbies, travelling is
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thing everyone enjoys once in a while. Some like to enjoy the time with friends and families, while others like to spend time by themselves on a trip. I strongly believe that travelling alone is better for your mind and body while you are at it.
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, when travelling in groups, all the members have to decide on
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and might lead to arguments.
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, when travelling alone you can decide what to do without any criticism or comments which is much easier; especially when everyone has different interests. Choosing restaurants, accommodation and transportation
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much more effortless when alone; without all the different standards and expectations.
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skills.
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, without the friends you originally come with on the trip, you can make friends with the people you meet on the way much
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. Especially when you travel to a new country or region alone, learning more about their culture and people is a priority that no
one
seems to understand. When you travel in groups, all you will want to do is hang out within yourselves and play without learning anything.
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, when you meet someone while travelling alone, you can get to know them and the country much better without any distractions. In a nutshell, I am aware that travelling in
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brings safety and comfort, but going on the trip yourself increases many qualities of life in society you need and helps you focus on your own self with no
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fighting or telling you what to do.
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