Some people prefer to travel around town by car, while others prefer public transit such as bus, train, or subway. Discuss both these positions and give your own opinion.

Some
people
choose public transportation because of several factors but some like to travel
by
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their own
car
. In my personal opinion,
the
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public transportation is advantageous but
personal
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a personal
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car
has positive aspects too. Public transit like bus or train
save
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a lot of cost
especially
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for students and elders. They
recieve
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receive
received
a special discount from being under and
over age
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.
Moreover
, these transits give
people
a good time and memorable experience during journey both single person and groups,
for example
,
traveling
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by train allows
people
to have a sleep together, to carry pets, to do activities like playing
a chess
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or reading books over
long
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period.
Also
, public transportation
reduce
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air pollution because it can contain many passengers to the same destination
then
it would be the best choice for those who concern about
environment
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the environment
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. On the flip side,
personal
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car
is convenient and privacy to loads your own belongings and to listen to music or to speak loudly and
freedomly
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freedom
freedoms
in
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any topics. And the most important reason why
people
select to go by
a
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car
is time-saving. There is no stop until the driver
reach
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to
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the destination compared with the bus
people
have to look
on
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at
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the timetable and if they missed they have to wait for the
next
round. Plus, it is always crowded in the primetime. To sum up, many
people
think it is more beneficial to take a
pulic
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public
transit but I personally prefer to travel by
a
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car
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • comfort
  • freedom
  • privacy
  • carbon footprint
  • cost-effective
  • traffic congestion
  • alleviate
  • urban infrastructure
  • balanced approach
  • peak traffic hours
  • commute
  • personal preference
  • lifestyle
  • sustainable transportation
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