Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to keep themselves occupied on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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technology

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been

plaing

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playing

plating

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dominent

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dominant

role in our life and it has a negative

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our children as well. Some people think it would be great to let

thier

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their

young manage their time but some think it is better to let parents do it for them. I think both

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views have pros and cons Children

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too

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and immature to have

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their

own decision and awareness. They like to play or eat whenever they want.

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might cause them

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sickness if they do not eat on time.

Besides

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their

grade will go down if they

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manage their time properly. So, parents should organise their leisure so they will know when

ther

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they

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can play

freedomly

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freedom

and when to have a

responibility

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responsibility

like doing homework. And some activities

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example, skateboarding may harm them so it is

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essential

to select the activity that suits their age and ability. It is true that some kids know when to have dinner and doing homework. They do not need to be under

order

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. If someone

force

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them they tend to be more aggressive and disobeyed. Anyway, letting them have a decision on activity

freedomly

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freedom

makes children feel

independence

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and be able to do

thing

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a thing

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with

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thier

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their

own. They can grow up from their decisions.

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, it helps them to find by themselves that what they really want to do not just following their friends. To sum up, adults should help their kids to choose

activity

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an activity

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to prevent any harm and sickness but

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practice them to make their own decision and encourage them to try new things.