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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The educational system is a relevant topic in a society: one half argue, that pupil should choose the
subjects
 on their preference, while others claim, that they should study
subjects
, that give scientific or technological education for utilising in
future
. Personally, I think, that all
necessary
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subjects
 for
future
 life must be studied from early grades. On the one hand, studying
subjects
 that are not required for your profession or in
future
 is a waste of time. Focusing on particular
subjects
 give a
person
 much more time to study something they truly wanted, and as a consequence,
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productivity and motivation increases, which will lead
for
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 better results. Even so, being superior in a narrow area brings to weaknesses on others.
For instance
, in spite of better knowledge in biology, computer science is still required currently and it is possible to lose a job at
this
 point. It leads to
lack
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 of skills and experience.
On the other hand
, exploring everything in
school
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 system gives a
person
 a lot of basic knowledge. In
this
 case, it will be possible to know about
effects
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 of chemicals on
human
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 body or
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 of some substances, even if a
person
 is an IT-specialist. Thereby, a
student
 will be able to think critically and conquer the demands of
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 world.
Nevertheless
, more
subjects
 can be overwhelming for a
student
, debasing his health condition.
As a result
, a
student
 will lose his desire
on
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 educating and choosing a direction, which confuses him.
Finally
, in my opinion, by studying many
of
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subjects
, a pupil can find out his potential in some
subjects
.
Also
, taken knowledge about
environment
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 will make a
person
 stronger
at
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 every aspect of life equally.
However
, students will study some
subjects
 deeper over the grades anyways. In conclusion, even if studying particular
subjects
 has its advantages in the beginning, exploring more
subjects
 will be more beneficial for a
student
 in
future
, because education is a crucial factor for living or "surviving", so
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 more you are educated, as more profits you will have.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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