Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think students should spend time on important subjects.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are taking interest in food science. Many opine that pupils should study the science of cuisine and how to make it whilst others believe that there are other significant subjects for students to focus on.
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essay will discuss both sides of the arguments and support the latter view.
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, Food science has broadened the outlook of the people has a very positive impact on our society; Linking Words
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, there is a good scope of employment for graduates in the near future as Linking Words
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, a survey conducted by The British Government found a 15% increase in sales of the restaurants that are adopting new techniques to prepare good quality products with less calorie intake.
In today's competitive world, one should choose a career in the information & technology sector which, in turn, will not only provide a handsome salary but Linking Words
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, If there had been no Engineers or Doctors, we would have not been living in the world we live in today. Linking Words
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To conclude, I think both sides of the arguments have their merits. Linking Words
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, In my opinion, there are other important areas where more focus is required and students should spend their time on other technical research sectors so that they can contribute enough to alleviate worsening conditions of underprivileged segments of societyLinking Words
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