Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

To reduce the increased temperature due to human's activities on earth must be halt with the contribution of the authorities.

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by some part of the society, others have a

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that to tackle

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serious issue people have to take some actions on their own.

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a concrete decision with my viewpoint.

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with, the government not only helps to decrease the level of global warming by implementing strict law but

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population to minimize

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, the uses of fossil fuels by the industries at large scale and exhaust fumes produce from huge uses of private means of transportation by the people could be halt or reduced when there will be solid law employed by the authority against overuse of these resources.

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, a survey conducted recently has revealed that 40%

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can be minimized

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globally if society follows the issued law and order with responsibility.

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, the government can arrange awareness program

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urban and rural areas to save the environment by growing more trees.

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, soil erosion and changes in climate can be stopped for

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long-term.

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responsibility as well to maintain

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climate. The

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to change their habits toward lifestyle. They must travel in public transportation rather than their own vehicles.

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will reduce the level of exhaust fumes which are harmful

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our atmosphere.

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, more biodegradable products must be utilized around the world to reduce the global warming problem.

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, people could prefer those things which could be recycled and reused in future for a certain time period.

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, the environmentally friendly

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assist to reduce the temperature of

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surface. To recapitulate, after discussing both views, I unequivocally opine that the authorities and communities have to work simultaneously to solve

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major issue. Government and inhabitant both should be responsible at different stages to dealt the global warming and get back

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nature.