It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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children
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but some of them affect children
negatively. I agree that penalties
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children
can benefit from it. However
, some of them have a massive impact on
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Therefore
, constructive penalties
which is an essential part of learning enable young ages to understand wrongs.
Despite having some constructive punishments
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which
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The aforementioned
punishments
are detrimental to mental health because children
who are exposed to violent issues tend to commit crimes because they start to think unhealthy way and the concepts of right and wrong do not develop in them. It is worthwhile to note that they copy what they see in childhood because they are in learning
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in childhood. However
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