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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in local hotel. In their feeback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, 1. say what the participants liked about the hotel 2. explain why they were unhappy about the food 3. suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to express gratitude for your team’s efforts in well-organizing my company’s all-day meeting
event
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 and forward their feedback about the dissatisfaction with
food
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 arrangements. The meeting’s audience was very much pleased with the ambience of the hotel and were quite satisfied with the ample parking space provided.
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, they were
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 impressed by how well the quality of
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 system was maintained during the entire session.
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, the participants were disappointed by the
food
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 options provided. We were offered
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only two vegetarian options which to be quite honest are not full meals for
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 long hour sessions, leaving them hungry during the
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 half of the
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.
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, a few sections of participants felt the spice levels of
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 were beyond their tolerance limits. Anyhow, apart from
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, my company had a smooth and wonderful
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, and I cannot thank you enough for providing all support for making it a success. My only suggestion for improvement would be to provide an equal share of vegetarian and non-vegetarian dishes as well as prepare these dishes considering a spice level
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 suitable for each
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 participant. I look forward to collaborating with your management for my company’s future endeavours. Yours faithfully, Angela.
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