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Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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First
 and foremost, the proliferation of advertisements
of
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 an item strengthens the value of that brand that they want to sell.
This
 is done by spending
large
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 amount of money
to
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the
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apply
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advertising companies. They promote the product in a more creative and informative way in which it grabs more people's attention. As a consequence, they will buy it in
a
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 belief that it would supply the qualities that are promised.
This
 results in the acceleration of the profit for the brand' products and its business.
On the contrary
, the advertisements might mislead the public.
This
 is due to the fact that there were incidents in which humans purchase products based on the promises and facts that the companies are offering, and they remain fake after
its
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 usage. They are frequently misled by not choosing the right quality
stuffs
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stuff
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 due to fake publicity.
Usually
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this
 happens due to the fact that actors or prominent members of the society act on
such
 ad-films making the world around to believe that the offerings and promises are true.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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