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Living in a country where you gave to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

#country #language #information #features #comparison
This
 bar chart illustrates information about the main export in Southland in the year 2000, 2022 and the predicted
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year 2025. It is clear from the graph that international tourism experienced a rise over the period, while meat
products
 numbers drop over the years.
However
, dairy
products
 showed some fluctuation in their rate. In 2000, just over 8 billion accounted for international tourism.
This
 went up to nearly 9 in 2022. From here, it rose steadily to just under 10 billion in the final year. Regarding the numbers of dairy
products
, in 2000 they exported 7 billion items.
This
 figure increased sharply to a peak of about 10 and plunged
with
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 0,5.
By contrast
, the export
in
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 meat
products
 started at 6 in 2000. There was a steady drop to a number of 5,5.
Finally
, it reached a low of around 5 in the future for 2025.
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