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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some problems associated with reliance on computer and what are some of the possible solutions

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In the 21st century, contingent upon electronic devices
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 on rising, especially school-goers, who extensively use laptops and desktops to the peak
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, there are certain consequences of excessive use of these.
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 to consider, the elevated
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 among pupils
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 lead to a lack of cognitive skills development. Rather than giving our brain to work, when we give the computer to process our works, the intellectual thinking of the
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 are lowering drastically.
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, in western countries, the research has done with several
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 who
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 more and with less.
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, the results have shown the IQ
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 of those who
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 more seems very low than the others who
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 fewer.
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, these adversities can be reduced by taking certain measures. As we humans should concentrate on taking the right balance of the consequences .The education system can encourage activity-based syllabus in schools. In the educational ,curriculum the government or the authorities should include activity-based pedagogy,
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 the
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 to computers can be reduced to a certain
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 and the
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 by themselves interact with other
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 and by themselves develop their intellectual skills.
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, The Sri Lankan education department has set up the curriculum mostly knowledge-based syllabus,
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 the
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 of
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 country comparing to other nations have higher IQ
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. To conclude, the accelerated adversities due to excessive utilization of electronic devices among
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 are obvious.
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, I believe, it is the responsibility of the rulers of a nation, parents and the related authorities to deploy proper rules and regulations for the betterment of future generation

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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