Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interest, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Hiring companies nowadays require details like marital status, leisure time activities and area of
interest
of an applicant to be included in bio-data while seeking a
job
.
Although
they find these particulars as a window to know about the
job
seeker well apart from his academics, others see them as an extra irrelevant datum which is of no use to the concern. But I think they are quite fruitful to organisations in terms of task allocation.
This
essay looks into both sides and
then
comes to my opinion.
To begin
with, an institution can assign work to a beginner based on their
interest
initially
. By
this
I mean, his productivity increases and gain experience in that field. A fresher,
for instance
, states system handling as his most favourite area in his resume' and when he is allocated duty in the computer section, he feels happy and executes the work perfectly,
however
it is out of his major study. Later he can be shifted to another department in the name of
job
rotation to kill the boredom.
Therefore
, knowing a person's field of
interest
is beneficial to that company.
On the other hand
, information on whether an employee is married or not does affect the profit of the organisation
in
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than his knowledge of work does. In fact, it affects the workers' efficiency since he has loads of family and financial commitments in either of the cases. A study from the World Labour Association reveals that 40% of employees are giving poor performance due to their stress from family even though he is skilled.
Hence
, employers have nothing to do with their status of marriage. All in all, I would like to conclude that after all,
job
satisfaction of an employee is a key factor to make them happy and it is possible only when he works in his desired field. For
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the companies have to know their area of
interest
and other things.
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