Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #men #women #qualities #jobs

It is often argued that female and male possess different

characterictics

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characteristics

in which each

gender

can not

preform

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the

job

that is

only suitable to the other

gender

This

essay completely disagrees with

this

statement because the perspectives toward

traditional

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the traditional

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roles of female and male have changed for the

last

ten years. Some would claim that there are specific jobs

require

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that require

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certain physical

characterictistics

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characteristics

. Occupations that require

strenght

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strength

, and muscles,

such

as mining, and construction are better suited for men while women do not have adequate energy and endurance to

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heavy tasks. It is believed that the innate nature of each

gender

controling

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controlling

the type

job

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that is

perfect for them. Women have been well known for demonstrating emotions , which means they more likely to do well at jobs

uch

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such

nany

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many

, teachers, and mother, involving emotional intelligence.

On the other hand

, I believe that both genders have shown

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immense interest in each other

job

because they believe that they have enough potential for doing any

job

they want.

This

is because of the increased emphasis on tradition roles by their societies, they have grown a great determination to prove that these outdated and cultural view is definitely absurd. A typical example of

this

is that some men have demonstrated outstanding cooking skills while women have achieved

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tremondous

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tremendous

success in managing multi corporations. For that reason, there are no longer

existance

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existence

of classifying occupation based on

gender

's capabilities. To sum up,

although

it is believed that female and male can only work in jobs that match

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their qualities, I would disagree with

this

view because there many cases of people who have successfully proven

this

view wrong.

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender roles
inherent qualities
social dynamics
merit-based selection
advancements in technology
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gender stereotypes
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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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