Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

Nowadays due to the effect of digitalization,
people
keep their focus on
science
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achievements and forget their cultural base. In
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essay, I would like to identify the causes of
this
situation and propose some corresponding solutions. I want/ It is important/ to admit that
technology
development and globalisation have become a reason why competition at work is as tough as it has never been before. As a famous writer said, we have to run with all our energy if we want to just stay
at
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the same place.
In other words
, if decades ago
people
had a calm rhythm of life, now we are all in a hamster wheel trying not to lose reached positions. So I think our certain lifestyle does not leave enough time for arts. At the same time,
COVID
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pandemic showed us that
technology
could provide /spark, awaken and increase the interests of society
to
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arts.
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,
technology
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of virtual reality might be used for providing
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sense of presence at famous museums or
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. Recent research of Cambridge institute discovered that during pandemic
people
from all over the world started to use modern
technology
like streaming services to immerse in the world of arts. Undoubtedly, if digital technologies became more affordable and cheaper,
people
would be more engaged in art. In conclusion, I want to say that humanity has been going through dramatic changes and technological progress might bring innovations that will alter the way we look at art. It is conclusively clear that
this
trend will continue to grow.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Economic growth
  • STEM subjects
  • Job security
  • Financial success
  • Pragmatic
  • Utilitarian pursuits
  • Art education
  • Inclusive
  • Engaging
  • Contemporary society
  • Social issues
  • Environmental themes
  • Digital platforms
  • Virtual museums
  • Interactive art
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