Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, children are in their own world of new technologies and social

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networks

. To grow a positive character in young individuals, some people demand compulsory volunteer

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whereas others disagree with the new plan. In my opinion, I totally agree

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mandatory

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for high school children.

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, involvement in community

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grows a social responsibility in

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generation which obviously bring positive aspects to

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society.

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would enable to bring peace

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both families as well as on communities.

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, working for charity by teenagers would help them to understand new aspects of life which would make them

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take mature decisions, so strict

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regulations

have to be brought in terms of community

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to make them see the world in a different aspect.

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, it moulds their character to a great extent

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to wisely understand and help them according to their ability. Because

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working with other young people would help them to have more patience.

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, teaching sports to adolescents would generate a sense of

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brotherhoods

and could become a mentor as well.

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, maintaining

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a neighbourhood

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creates the same feeling. In conclusion, I fully agree with the statement and

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mandatory unpaid jobs could make future generation a better group of people.

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, these kinds of activities

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start from a preliminary age.