As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request the information regarding the historical exhibition

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being organised at Darling Habour near Haymarket. A part of the student social survey project, I am organising a small group of students to visit your exhibition. I need some information related to it.

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, could you please let me know what kind of historical items are being exhibited, I noticed that most of the items are handmade and certain items are made by disabled children. Please give me all the details of the articles being exhibited.

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, kindly let me know the opening and closing dates of the exhibition.

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, as many of the group come from low-level economic backgrounds, they are unable to afford the full price of the ticket. Please let me know if there are any discounts available for school students.

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, it would be great if you could let me know beforehand as I need to organise the project. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Piyatida

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As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

In number of countries, some People think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing New railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

Some people argue that social media platforms are essential for communication and staying connected, while others believe that they pose a threat to personal privacy. On which position do you stand? Discuss the supporting ideas for your chosen position.

Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?