As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request the information regarding the historical exhibition

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being organised at Darling Habour near Haymarket. A part of the student social survey project, I am organising a small group of students to visit your exhibition. I need some information related to it.

Firstly

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, could you please let me know what kind of historical items are being exhibited, I noticed that most of the items are handmade and certain items are made by disabled children. Please give me all the details of the articles being exhibited.

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, kindly let me know the opening and closing dates of the exhibition.

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, as many of the group come from low-level economic backgrounds, they are unable to afford the full price of the ticket. Please let me know if there are any discounts available for school students.

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, it would be great if you could let me know beforehand as I need to organise the project. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Piyatida

o_unananMon Mar 15 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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173 words

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As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore physical education and sports should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Last week, you lost your luggage while traveling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: - Describe the characteristics of what you lost - Explain how you lost it - Tell the insurance company what you need from them

Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn or are forgetting many basic skills .to what extent is it true that people are becoming so reliant on modern technology that they are no longer able to do some things without it?

Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.