Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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freshwater has become a limited
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for human beings in recent years. Even though
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are intending to invent more advanced technology to save
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resource
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, the waste speed of
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is definitely faster than the technology creational speed.
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, to preserve
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by governments is required. In
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article, I will discuss why I agree with protecting
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resource
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and the reason why some residents still think they could use
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as much as they want.
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, there are about only
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fresh
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water
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could
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be used by humans directly in daily life. Because the majority of
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is from
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the ocean
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- the
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saltwater
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water
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.
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,
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salt
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water
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could not be drunk by
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directly, it is harmful
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humans' health.
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, scientists innovate technology to recycle
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ocean
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to let
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use it,
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, the processing duration is
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long and expensive. To specify, comparing with
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solution, to save
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by citizens is easier and more
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efficiency
. But, there is only
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limited numbers of
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prefer
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to save
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by themself, in order to achieve the best result to
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scarce
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on earth, governments should define the boundary clearly for citizens
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as controlling the
resouce
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resource
or release a law.
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,
this
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is definitely a useful way to save
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fresh
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freshwater
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water
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for longer using.
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, some
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still believe that they could use
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water
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as much as they could, the main reason is they pay
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fee to governments.
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, they understand
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is only a type of
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such
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as electricity.
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, some
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residents
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do not consider
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is a scarce
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for the
enviornment
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environment
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environment
is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure
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spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts. . To conclude, to save
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water
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is necessary for all of us,
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,
government
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obviously suppose to take charge of using
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, meanwhile, how to let some citizens
to
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understand to protect the
fresh
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freshwater
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water
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is important as well.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater
  • personal freedom
  • resources
  • daily necessities
  • environmental sustainability
  • depletion
  • regulation
  • distribution
  • underprivileged
  • future generations
  • conservative use
  • sustainable practices
  • monitoring
  • regulating
  • judiciously
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