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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company having a uniform? there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?

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Uniforms
 are a necessity for
employees
 working in a certain
company
. They add a lot of
benefits
 to the
company
. Employers wearing
uniforms
 in a
company
 shows the unity of a
company
 and makes all
staffs
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staff
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feel like their equals. Companies that have
uniforms
 for their staff expect them to wear
it
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them
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 every day to maintain the discipline of the
company
 and follow the rules of the
company
. It
also
 helps
in
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for
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 security purposes by not allowing anyone without
the
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a
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uniform
 into the
company
.
Uniforms
also
 help in brand promotion,
uniforms
 with brand
name
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names
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 and logos promote the
company
 wherever the employee goes, it
also
 becomes a free source of promotion and advertisement to the
company
. It
also
 helps the
company
 create a brand image as the
uniform
differentiate
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differentiates
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 the
employees
 from the other competitors in the market. It
also
 provides numerous
benefits
 to the staff of the
company
. As the
uniform
 is provided by the employer, it saves the staff tons of money and they do not have to worry about what to wear to work. It
also
 provides extra safety
benefits
 as the
uniforms
 are designed with Flame-Resistant workwear which protects them from accidental fire and electrical hazards.
Uniforms
 provide
employees
 with a lot of
benefits
 in terms of safety, promotion,
security
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and security
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 purposes and companies that force or have a rule that makes the
employees
 wear a
uniform
 isn’t a bad idea at all
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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