Some people believe that some purchase product base on their needs not kn advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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modern world

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advertising is debatable. Some people think that people will buy

those kind

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that kind

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product

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which they need and they don’t want to see any kind of

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. I partly agree with the statement but we

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need

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. I will describe here why I partly agree and will give some reasons

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about

advantage

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and disadvantage of advertising The main reason is that adds make us confused to buy something. Some of

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the advertisement

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mislead us by giving a lot of information which attract us to purchase.

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However

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the

product

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we don’t need, we are pressurised mentally to purchase. Another thing

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apply

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there are many

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

287 words

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