A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problem if its not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Tourism

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Can bring people from different backgrounds together in

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place. It is well known that a smart strategy can make any country successful in

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essay will discuss the

advantages

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and disadvantages of

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in the modern

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of all, it is well known that

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can draw people attention from everywhere in the

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it

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people from different countries travel around the

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to light their adventures spirit.

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of the major

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of

tourism

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as economic,

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is the main reason for

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from the

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place, it

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a huge difference for any country in their income. Another advantage is promotional

tourism

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helps any modern country to raise itself in the

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,

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of the disadvantages of

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is

culture

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clash, meaning that tourists often lack respect for tradition and culture.

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, drinking in public, wearing indecent clothes in public,

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in Saudi Arabia, cultural doesn’t accept any of these 

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mentioned before.

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, another disadvantage is seasonal fluctuations due to

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jobs being temporary and insecure.

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, as a freelancer who worked on so many different events, the longest period was 6 months as a security supervisor.

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, the

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one

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lasted only for

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month—it always depends on the event period. In conclusion,

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tourism

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has disadvantages

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as culture clash and seasonal fluctuations, it

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has some major

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example

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, economic and promotional, I strongly believe that the

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of

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outweigh its drawbacks