A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problem if its not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Tourism

Can bring people from different backgrounds together in

one

place. It is well known that a smart strategy can make any country successful in

tourism

.

This

essay will discuss the

advantages

and disadvantages of

tourism

in the modern

world

 

First

of all, it is well known that

tourism

can draw people attention from everywhere in the

world

it

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people from different countries travel around the

world

to light their adventures spirit.

one

of the major

advantages

of

tourism

such

as economic,

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is the main reason for

tourism

from the

first

place, it

make

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a huge difference for any country in their income. Another advantage is promotional

tourism

helps any modern country to raise itself in the

world

. 

However

,

one

of the disadvantages of

tourism

is

culture

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clash, meaning that tourists often lack respect for tradition and culture.

For

example

, drinking in public, wearing indecent clothes in public,

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in Saudi Arabia, cultural doesn’t accept any of these 

behaviors

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mentioned before.

Moreover

, another disadvantage is seasonal fluctuations due to

tourism

jobs being temporary and insecure.

For

example

, as a freelancer who worked on so many different events, the longest period was 6 months as a security supervisor.

On the other hand

, the

last

one

lasted only for

one

month—it always depends on the event period. In conclusion,

although

tourism

has disadvantages

such

as culture clash and seasonal fluctuations, it

also

has some major

advantages

.

For

example

, economic and promotional, I strongly believe that the

advantages

of

tourism

outweigh its drawbacks