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Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this

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People have different views about whether high school graduates should work for a
couple
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years
 before going to
university
.
However
, it is
befenical
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beneficial
 to their growth
although
 it may have drawbacks. The gap
years
 to working between school and
university
 is helpful to get social experience. Usually,
colleage
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college
students
 graduate at the age of
twenty three
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 after spending more than 15
years
 of study before entering the
job
 market. There is
a
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 increasing rate of
students
 who
gradute
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graduate
 from
university
 but are not capable of getting a decent
job
 as they expect which means these
students
 have waste
years
 of study in
colleage
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college
. If they are allowed to enter the
job
markert
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market
 before
university
, they get the opportunity to face difficulty ahead, and they will know what
ablity
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ability
 they should learn in their future study and avoid the same frustration later.
Furthermore
,
job
 experience before
university
 is
benefical
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beneficial
 to their financial condition which provides more convenience to their college life. With
working
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 salary, they are able to schedule more happy trips with their classmates without adding burden to their family.
However
, these jobs that high school graduates take usually are not well paid since they do not require special training or knowledge, people may think it is a waste of time for them and it
postpond
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postponed
postpone
 their future professional career. And
also
, after
years
 of working in the
job
 market , they may become too socializing and would not be able to focus on studying again. In
conclustion
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conclusion
, gap
years
 for working has a profound effect on
students
, people need to carefully think about the drawbacks as well as
beneifits
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benefits
 before
fianlizing
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finalizing
finalising
 their decision.
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