In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 3795421818

In recent times, some people believe that a huge amount of money should be dedicated to the construction of a new

railway

line

. While others think that, public funds should be spent on improving existing

transportation

. It is agreed that the focus should be on enhancing the current transport system. On one hand,

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of a new

railway

line

would be very beneficial to the public even though it would take a long time to finish.

For example

, building a rail system requires adequate planning, huge financial commitment and

also

the use of competent engineers. The financial implications of a major project like

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can cripple the treasury of a nation because

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a project of

this

capacity requires a consistent number of years to plan before the actual building process begins.

Therefore

this

can have negative effects on the budget which may likely affect other areas of the economy.

On the other hand

, continued investment into existing public

transportation

is a more realistic approach because it would make the daily lives of the public easier.

For instance

, if huge sums of money are used to buy more buses with state of the art facilities like; air conditioning, with the addition of the internet, and computerised payment options, moving from one place to another would become considerably easier yet comfortable.

Therefore

,

this

would be beneficial to the public and it would be highly appreciated.

Finally

, in my opinion, the options which are investing in a new

railway

line

or

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those funds into improving already existing transport are both valid

although

I prefer the latter because I think that a new

railway

line

would take years to accomplish,

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causes delayed gratification but

in contrast

, the improvement of the current

transportation

system is a realistic and more feasible approach because people can start benefiting from it immediately. In conclusion, a new

railway

line

would require lots of money and years to accomplish

therefore

, wasting the resources that could be

channeled

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into making the lives of the public easier is unnecessary. After

thorough

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analysis

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subject, I predict that investing public funds into making improvements

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existing

transportation

is more beneficial.