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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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These days, senior citizens are put in nursing
homes
 rather than being looked over by family members.
This
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pros
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 and cons of the trend and argue in
favor
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 of the former view. On the one hand, with
age
 comes along multiple medical conditions. Mainly, due to
this
 reason, the elderly require special attention and
care
 from designated medical support staff. In
care
homes
, they are under constant supervision and support.
Moreover
, at
this
age
, people long for companionship which can be found at a home with people of the same
age
 group. With new friends comes new hopes and aspirations to live life to the fullest. People inspire each other and not feel worthless around the busy schedules of their families. They become more independent of their life and happiness.
On the other hand
, post-living a life full of responsibilities, older adults need
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 for their hard work to feel accomplished after retirement. When sent to a
care
 home, they often feel abandoned and might lose their will to live.
For instance
, especially in India traditional values go against sending the older generation to
such
homes
. Young children growing up in the shadow of grandparents teaches children, unconditional love.
Additionally
, taking
care
 of the senior member is considered a form of responsibility and blessing. To conclude, the advantages of the view overweigh the disadvantages. The love and comfort of one's own house can be delivered through
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age
, a support group at
such
homes
. Proper medical supervision and plenty of attention are of essential importance to
this
age
 group, which are the positive highlights of
this
 trend.
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