Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It appears that an article is missing before the word bad. Consider adding the article.

The noun phrase unsatisfactory job seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

The spelling of endeavor is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

It seems that article use may be incorrect here.

It seems that article use may be incorrect here.

It appears that the preposition on may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.

It appears that the word products should use the genitive case. Consider changing the noun.

The word that doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

It seems that article use may be incorrect here.

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

The pronoun themselves may be unnecessary. Consider removing it.

The word hardly doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

The word the may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.

The word success doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

The verb ignored after the modal verb should does not appear to be in the correct form. Consider changing the verb form.

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.