Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many
people
think that it is better to accept bad
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a bad
life
situation
, such
as unsatisfactory
job or lack of money. Others debate that it is better to Add an article
an unsatisfactory
endeavor
and improve the situations. It is indisputable that stay in the comfort zone is the best way to live. Change the spelling
endeavour
However
, there are the keys to unlock the
better Correct article usage
a
life
for people
who put the
great effort Correct article usage
apply
on
their ways.
According to Verify preposition usage
in
into
this
statement, sometimes people
need to work
without passion in their jobs
and get unfair payments because it is better to risk a harsh life
situation
catching their dream jobs
or their goal life
. For example
, farmers in Thailand are jobs
that need to work
very hard. They need experiences and special skills to plant their crops. Unfortunately, most of the farmers are cut out their products prices
by the middleman and they need to accept that Change to a genitive case
the prices of their products
their products' prices
situation
because it is easier that
trading the product by themselves.
Correct your spelling
than
In contrast
, people
should believe in their self-efficacy. They should have hope and passion in their life
to reach the
better Correct article usage
a
situation
. For instance
, there are many people
proved
Correct pronoun usage
who proved
themselves
that they can Delete the pronoun
apply
work
in different jobs
such
as the astronauts. Some astronauts used to work
as doctors or teachers and they try and improve themselves hardly
to achieve Replace the word
hard
the
dreams. Change the word
their
Moreover
, no one can deny that the success
Replace the word
successful
people
always have a strong intention and never give up on their life
no matter how hard it is.
In conclusion, I believed that people
should not ignored
the bad Change the verb form
ignore
situation
in their life
, they should try to change it
and receive a better Correct pronoun usage
them
life
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