These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time . What do you think this change happened ? What are the effects of this change in attitude ?
Many latest in machine industries . They produce large amounts of
people
think that nowadays we opt to throw defected items
far away , while compared to past days , people
generally repaired the products
instead
of buying new ones and also
they preserve this
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this item
these items
items
for very long years . This
is because advanced technology has taken place in mechanical engineering as a result
it leads to growth in land
pollution
. This
essay explains why many people
throw items
rather than repair
it
and impacts Correct pronoun usage
them
on
the environment , followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Currently, we throw used Change preposition
apply
items
into the atmosphere instead
of repair
them. Change the verb form
repairing
This
is just due to the technology becomesCorrect article usage
the
items
in one day which are low quality and cheap. So many people
buy dozens of single products
as they get discount on items
if they purchased in a great range. Also
, recently many companies give a huge amount of offers on products
. In contrast
, in past days , there was no more machine so less production occurs as well as older people
value the products
so they repair
as many time and keep it longer times. This
trend is totally reversed in the present days . For example
, many older people
still preserve their radio with them because it is very important for them .
In terms of its effects , this
attitude has a serious impact on the environment such
as land
pollution
. In other words
, more production of cheaper and qualityless items
,so more throwing of items
into the atmosphere . This
leads to the filling of land
with used items
. Also
, most of the products
are made from plastic which is non-biodegradable material and it is difficult to recycle. All of this
result in a
growth in the Remove the article
apply
pollution
of land
. For instance
, Indian scientist found that an increment occurs land
pollution
mainly plastic items
in metros of this
country , this
is because of
Change preposition
apply
people
prefer to buy new thingsr
when their Correct your spelling
things
products
have a minor defect as well as they don't like to repair
it .
To conclude, recently we throw defective products
on the land
because of millions of variety available in each and every product due to technology become advance in mechanical engineering. This
result in an increase in land
pollution
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