Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter - Describe your colleague’s job at the company - Describe a time you worked with this person - Explain why you believe this person deserves the award

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Dear Jackson, I am writing

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letter suggesting Mr Atlee should be recognised with “the Employee of the Year” award. He is in the customer retention depart handling clients who are either extremely disappointed or not interested to continue our service. A month ago, I had an opportunity to work with him for one of our major client accounts, who was about to quit business with us due to an error. Fortunately, I had Atlee, with whom I coordinated to settle

this

issue, eventually, he came up with an effective solution, which made the client happy, and

also

extended the contract for 2 years. From my viewpoint, retaining a customer who has already made a decision is one of the toughest jobs which needs a lot of analysis, patience and logical thinking, and Atlee has all these.

Furthermore

, he is one of the few employees with 100% attendance in our organisation.

Also

, we can notice him serving all customers with high priority and commitment, where he never failed to

follow-up

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with his customer and managed to receive compliments for his outstanding service.

Thus

, I believe he is the most deserving candidate to be appreciated. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Anna

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

203 words

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