Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Friends are the best part of human relationship.I have
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very few friends and
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blessed to spend my life with them.We always cherish when we have a companion who
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similar views and approaches.
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not productive or beneficial
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.We need to have people who
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a difference of opinion with us as they would be our real mentors. The bond between two people sharing similar ideas
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always exciting.
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during my school days,we used to be a group of five where we tend to have few
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activities
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we decide on a similar
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code,we used to have
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every single day and it goes on.We did not have much time to
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our dissimilarities as we were still kids and having fun.We enjoyed each moment during our leisure hours.
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,when I was in my college or where I work
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relationship holds a different perspective.We are mature enough to differentiate between what is right and wrong.In
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we
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a variety of suggestions,
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be regarding finances or may be concerned with our emotions where we tend to show or face the differences.
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best friend
once told me to invest in gold
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my thought was to make a fixed deposit.The varied opinions are obvious here.
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we should always appreciate our friend's point of view which would be accurate
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instances. As to conclude ,my opinion towards friendship is that it should be embraced.Friends do not fail to accompany us through our ups and downs.They are partners in crime as they are aware of almost everything around us.A person who corrects us,who give their views and who argue on certain ailments is
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they would never miss
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share
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the fun.
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fortunate ,I have a few of them with me.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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