Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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teachers

should encourage pupils to behave well or just focus on teaching academic

subjects

. From my point of view, it would be ideal if

teachers

educate juveniles and

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them how to be

well-mannered

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person simultaneously. On the one hand, a part of humans argues that as parents are responsible for

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the behavior

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of their offspring so

teachers

also

should educate them to act well.

Initially

, young adults are in the teen ages in which they often try to imitate

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each other and behave the same as their friends.

Therefore

, if

teachers

teach pupils how to act in a proper way, so every child will act the same as his or her peer.

Furthermore

, there is a general consensus that explanation about what is right and what is wrong from aside sometimes

also

affects children

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as their parents’ words.

Subsequently

,

teachers

are able

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impact

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pupils’ manners.

On the other hand

, another part of individuals

opine

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that it is not

responsibility

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the responsibility

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of school

teachers

to educate

youngsters

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how to behave well.

Instead

of teaching

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behaviour

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behavior

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teachers

should focus merely on

subjects

they teach.

First

and foremost, some

teachers

have

impolite

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an impolite

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character

such

as being rude toward school children. If a child behaves inappropriate way,

teacher

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the teacher

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is able to shout or even beat them.

Hence

, severe parents are against

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such

kind of acts to their progenies

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and argue that

teachers

have to focus on their job. Another example of the notion that

teachers

should only teach student academic

subjects

is

distraction

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a distraction

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.

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precise, school

teachers

are able to be distracted by having a lot of responsibilities on their shoulders

such

as train youngsters how to discipline well.

Thus

,

distraction

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the distraction

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would affect

effectiveness

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the effectiveness

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of lessons in schools. To recapitulate, I hold the view that

teachers

at schools are carrying

responsibility

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the responsibility

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to teach

behavior

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and academic

subjects

to pupils, while others convince that teacher should concentrate only on

subjects

in order to provide young adults with

good

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a good

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education.