As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

Nowadays with the economic growth in many countries around the world. An increasing number of people are becoming affordable for their own

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, and

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usage in daily lives has a rising tendency.

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trend has brought

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significant benefits to individuals in comparing to the harms to the environment,

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, from my perspective, the growing

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ownership trend should be encouraged. Personal

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have brought

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great convenience to every individual. It offers flexibility to travellers and commuters.

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, lots of companies today prefer to set their office building at the outskirt of a city,

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as

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in Silicon Valley which is located in the

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of the great San Francisco Area. A car ensure the employee for

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a company to get to work on time, and more importantly, with a good spirit!

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,

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brings flexible timetable and itinerary to the travellers, permitting them to jump into a side trip with a flash of inspiration.

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, a plethora of people

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the pollution which is generated by combustion engines. Admittedly, noxious gas could be produced during

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of the car engines.

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, most of the major car industrial companies,

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as Mercedez-Benz and Lexus, are applying a variety of improvements to their recently released models in order to enhance the burning efficiency. Statistically, more than 60% of solid unburnt particulars are now recycled, which dramatically reduces the

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of deleterious materials emitting

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into the atmosphere. In a word, technology has

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resolved the pollution problem caused by

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. In conclusion, personal

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benefit every resident who

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living in the modern era as the

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provide

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a comfortable trip.

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, it is stereotypical to concern about the damages that modern

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might lead to because

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industrialization has provided us

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practical solution to the issue.