Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

The ever increasing
job
competition
, the pressure of constant deadlines, the technological dependency in
jobs
and people’s expectation to thrive in the
workplace
have changed the definition of professional life and most of the
employees
require to
work
harder and for long
hours
each day. In
this
essay, I will examine the reasons behind
this
work
pressure and
lengthy
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working
hours
and suggest some ways that
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employers
can help improve the condition. High
competition
in the
job
market is one of the reasons why
jobs
have become
such
stressful these days.
Employers
always have options for finding new
employees
and replace someone and
this
is why someone who has already been hired has to
work
hard to save his
job
.
This
naturally has negative psychological effects on
employees
.
Employees
have to
work
for longer
hours
to meet their performance target as the invisible threat of firing is there. Increasing
competition
caused by globalisation is another reason to make the
workplace
such
stressful. Many small and medium business entities need to compete with other multinational companies and companies in developing nations where labour price is cheaper. The effect of
this
on
employees
is that they know they may be made redundant if the business they
work
for fails.
This
force the
employees
not only to
work
longer
hours
but
also
suffer from
work
-related stress and uncertainty. In most
of
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organisations,
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employers
these days set targets for
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employees
and most of the targets are hard to achieve.
As a result
,
employees
are forced to
work
beyond 10
hours
per day and even on days-off.
Finally
, people’s expectation from the offices have reached
to
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a higher position and people are ready to sacrifice their personal life for the sake of promotions.
This
shift of mind setup has
also
attributed to the increasing
work
pressure. Despite the higher
competition
in business,
employers
should ensure a healthy working environment and support their workers morally and financially in order to sustain
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the long run. An organisation cannot survive without experiences and dedicated
employees
and
constant
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fear of uncertainty cannot ensure a healthy
workplace
.
Employers
should encourage
employees
to
work
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regular
hours
and
work
overtime only when it is absolutely necessary.
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employers
should
also
encourage people who perform better and award them for their performance. The workers should be allowed to take breaks and should not suffer from
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of losing
jobs
.
Finally
,
the
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employers
should have a friendly relationship with the workers and have meetings to listen to their problem. If the employer can assure the
employees
that they are ready to help each other and their
jobs
are secured, they can
then
expect better outputs from the
employees
. In conclusion, higher
competition
in the
job
market, globalisation and people’s aim to reach higher are the main reasons for stress in the
workplace
and the
employers
have a lot to contribute to improving
this
situation. A healthy
workplace
is very crucial for the best performance
by
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the
employees
.
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