Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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coming directly from farms and they are a long distance. It is good for
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nature and cost savings if persons take the
food
which is fashioned by the regional
farmers
. From my perspective, there are more advantages than disadvantages and the merits
also
surpass the
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demerits. One of the positive of grab
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to vindicate the farmer income. Not only that the
food
producers earn money by selling crops at the same
time
but
also
they can provide the latest crops which is clean and healthy. The
food
which
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valuable should be ploughed in
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own field so that it will not be rotten. Another
advantages
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that to serve good quality.
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, it is made in
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supercoolant
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environment.
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, it has a
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view where it could be solved properly.
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, purchasing fresh
food
from
farmers
it
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would be benefited for the people of the country.
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of positive sides, it is not possible to create
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availability for the buyers because crops are not stored all
time
. Meanwhile, there
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no affordable things which will be bought
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the same
time
at little cost.
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,
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is the
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aspects where it could be a
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issue of the country.
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is a very
time consuming
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issue but it creates a lot of problems of
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. In conclusion, to purchase from
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is a good idea which precisely
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good things a lot and
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positive side
also
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the drawbacks.
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