Traffic and housing problems in major cities can be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days with
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urban populations, there are major problems with congestion not only price but
aslo
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also
the
avaliablity
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availability
of
accomodition
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accommodation
in large
cities
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in the worlds. They can only
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by moving companies and factories to the countryside. I strongly agree
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has positive side effects in making
cities
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more liveable.
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with,
the
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traffic is
major
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problem in the
cities
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but it is not from commuting
employement
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employment
sides but
also
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from the general public transportation in the
cities
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. While
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may be fact
,
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if the number of employee vehicles
are
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reduced on
cities
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street, a
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large
population decrease in rush hours.
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, the peaks hour traffic
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situation
is employee go to
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work and to home.
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, in regards to housing problems,
population
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the population
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is always
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is always increasing
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increases
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in the
cities
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.
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,The large apartments are fulled
with
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employee
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an employee
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with their firms and family.
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, If the housing estate shifted to the countryside, city
apartement
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apartment
cost will be reduced and
certaintly
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certainly
increases
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in availability.
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conclusion, relocating the worker to
rular
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regular
areas to work and reside. The heavy traffic and lack of
accommaditon
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accommodation
problems in the
cities
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changes
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better. As far as I am concerned, I agree the government enforce
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a law
to
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inorder to
increases
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our standard of living in our hectic life.
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