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Some parents think that child care centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that at the time parents are at work close relatives,
grandparents
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 can take better
care
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 of
children
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. while other says caretaker can provide better service. It is agreed that family member can take better
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 of a
child
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. In the easy will discuss both the views.
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 are very affectionate towards their
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grandchildren children
 they will take the proper
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 of the
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. Whereas,
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 staying with
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 their bond will increase and
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grandparents
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 know how to take
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 of a
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 as they are experienced ones.
Children
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 will get to know about old stories, games.
Children
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 will learn other qualities from
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 as respecting elders, helping them. For ,example
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 get to know about
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history of how the world was earlier they will get descriptive ideas.
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, keeping
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 at held
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centre
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 will learn to live alone at a very young age.
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, in infant ,
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 there are several other
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 of different caste, religion and language.
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 will
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 a bond and mingle with other
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 not only that but
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children
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 will adapt to
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 environment at an initial age. There are some drawbacks of a childcare
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.
Children
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 are not treated properly and full attention is not given to them
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 they are misguided. For ,example some childcare
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children
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 are harassed, torchered which affects the mental health of a
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. In conclusion, I firmly believe
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 are the best option they will provide proper childcare
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children
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 as they are blood-related.
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care
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centre
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 remains a viable option.
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