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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is undoubtedly true that advanced technology has given several essential things that revolutionized every aspect of humankind’s life. Nowadays, many
computer
 software and online applications are available, which can easily translate any
language
 into another
language
.
However
, it does not mean that learning a foreign
language
 is not useful. I cannot entirely agree with the above view. I think that linguistic skills
such
 as learning different
languages
 are Important for an individual’s development/ person’s development. I would discuss some points which strengthen my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs. There are many advantages of learning foreign
languages
.
First
, studying other countries’
languages
 empowers and boosts people’s confidence while communicating with foreigners and opens various career opportunities worldwide. The disadvantage of the converter is in the business field and academic field. We need a converter that quickly converts one
language
 to another to work very well at that time. but during face to face conversation
computer
 does not help
In addition
 to
this
, all most all software that converts the
language
 work online means they require the internet all the time. So it is tough to use them in remote areas.
Furthermore
, the other benefit of learning a foreign
language
 is understanding other cultures and society, which increase a person’s knowledge and increase the curiosity to learn different things.  Learning other
languages
 proves very beneficial for those who want to pursue a career in the tourism industry where multiple
languages
 are spoken. Another fact is that a
computer
 is a machine
which
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 only can convert words from one
language
 to another but without emotions.
On the other hand
, if a person knows different
languages
.
Then
 he/she can easily make other people understand what he is trying to say? Full of emotions and feelings. In conclusion. the
however
computer
 is beneficial in several fields
such
 as medical, engineering, calculations, But in the case of
language
 translation. I think a person should learn a foreign
language
 because it is very beneficial for his/her career.
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