Some people feel that government should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and school. Other feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, mostly 30% of the income to the government was generated from the tourism sector. Because in every
country
there are some special places that will be there, like temples with ancient history, and different cultures and special food recipes. I believe that advantages
outweigh the disadvantages.
Correct article usage
the advantages
Firstly
, our government was spending a lot of money on developing tourist places to provide a better experience to tourists. Because a huge number of tourists were visiting our country
everyday
, Replace the word
every day
for
enjoying the scenery of mountains and some hill stations. While our Change preposition
to
country
has a long ancient history about temples and cultures. For instance
, recently, a survey was conducted by our government about for what purpose the international people
were visiting our country
. Although
in
Change preposition
as
result
, most of the international Correct article usage
a result
people
were visiting our country
for devotional purposes, and to enjoy the mountain scenery which comes twice a year.
Secondly
, because of tourists, at some point
the environment was getting spoiling. Add a comma
,point
People
come from different places to visit our country
, while they don't
know any rules and regulations which they have to follow in our country
. So they don't
know what to do and what not to do, while they will eat the food and throw themselves on the road. For instance
, recently one incident happened in the temple
near my house. While I was in the temple
, one foreign came inside to the temple
with slippers. Actually, in our country
slippers aren't
allowed into the temple
. He didn't
know that a big clash happened at that time.
To conclude, In my opinion, advantages
outweigh the disadvantages. Correct article usage
the advantages
Although
people
visit different countries for their own reasons. Before they land, they must be aware of the rules and regulations which were followed in that particular country
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite