Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Global environment protection should be addressed by the
governement
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government
and not by the population. I partially agree with the statement as I believe that
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can make an impact to prevent the deterioration of the
enviroment
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environment
. On the one hand, all the political organisations should do something in order to prevent
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damages in term of pollution. In fact, it is concerning that there are few politicians personally involved in projects that try to reduce sea pollution from plastic and other toxic material.
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it must be a decision taken by the local government and not by an individual.
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, more attention should be placed on increasing companies that can constantly recycle all these material and doing
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creating a circular recycling process.
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, all the politicians have the major
responsability
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responsibility
to protect the
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environment
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think that if each
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to do his best the whole community can be strong enough to make some changes.
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, if the problem is plastic consumption and from one day to the
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every
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try to reduce it by 50 per cent, the effect of that choice will make an enormous impact on protecting the environment.
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, I believe that even a small action made by one
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could change positively the way another
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think and act and
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will bring
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a chain reaction that will
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make a huge change. In conclusion, even if the government itself has the power to make big changes every people can do it as well acting as a community. In the future politicians can
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be more pro-active and try to influence the people in a way that they will be more motivated to make small changes that will
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what is around them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental protection
  • responsibility
  • politicians
  • individuals
  • large-scale
  • policies
  • regulations
  • impact
  • corporations
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • resources
  • expertise
  • collective efforts
  • difference
  • combination
  • crucial
  • effective
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