Nowadays, different language software are available that restrict the people to learn foreign languages. Learning a new language is important or it’s ok to use the technology for it what is your opinion?

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to ameliorated and exotic lifestyles under which they find it arduous to extract time for learning new overseas languages they are busy in their own businesses. Studying different tongue is prominent. I will discuss my opinion in the posterior paragraph. Admittedly, in
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energy to learn
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use their phone to understand the other person talk because they are studying with different nations student and
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their
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very beneficial because it
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culture and helpful to communicate with other
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occurring the technical error
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business men
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have enough knowledge to
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tongues
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they expand their business worldwide without any affair of loss. Software
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the folklore to learn some particular words but if
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then
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any field. To
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, learning
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important thing in our life so
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their own rather than avoid the usage of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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