Companies spend millions each year on advertising online,in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need. What are the positive and negative affects of consumerism?

Companies spend millions each year on advertising online,in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need. What are the positive and negative
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of consumerism? Nowadays,advertisement has increasingly become popular.
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amount of money is spent annually by organizations on adverts that
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those online,newspaper and billboards. Resulting in
individuals
purchasing products
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of little necessity to them.
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on end buyers. The major merit of buying products displayed on the internet or in
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is having fashion wears for different occasions.
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is because a lot of
individuals
have a planned schedule of various events for each day of the week.
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in the bank
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wardrobe full of various types of clothes.
As a result
of these,the companies
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them allowance monthly for looking good and
also
they have a policy that every employee must look smart and corporate within the office environment. It is
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no doubt, that there
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been an influx of customers on a daily basis because of the high standard of the company.
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individuals
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to be informed and educated about how certain drugs would be essential for their body.
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some medications would improve the immune system of the
individuals
and there would be a reduced rate of them falling ill due to the daily intake of these vitamins
However
,spending way above budget is demerit and
this
causes
individuals
to have little or no savings for emergency situations.
In addition
,items displayed on some website online are different from what is delivered to customers and
therefore
creates a bad image for
such
establishments.Due to
this
,
individuals
would prefer to visit a physical store that they would walk into and pick up whatever they want to buy. In conclusion,
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receiving substandard items whereas being educated on the usefulness of some drugs is of great benefit to the health
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individuals
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