Write a letter explaining water issues in your apartment

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Daniel/ Uzoma, I think it

high

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is high

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time you escalate

this

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water

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issue in my unit to your management if you have not done so. Since I moved into the unit in 2016, I have battled

this

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problem of

water

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running dry in my

tank

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simply because anytime you pump

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water

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the

tank

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is not filled or sometimes

water

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does not get into the

tank

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. Jide had tried to

solved

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this

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problem when I

first

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moved in but to no avail. I

then

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took it upon myself to let your staff understand the routine of shutting up some taps to enable me

get

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water

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when they pump. I am tired of reminding them to do

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every time.

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of them

to follow

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the routine they take a ladder to start climbing up the manway to check the

tank

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. The pop in

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this

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areas

have

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cracks all over the edges

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I am always running out of

water

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sometimes in the middle of the night or when taking my bath not to mention the

colored

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water

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because

water

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is always at

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lowest point in the

tank

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. I have at the backyard jars filled with

water

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just

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incase

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. I have resolved to find other alternatives possibly get a 1000

liters

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tank

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the backyard. I am just tired of

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kind of service. Regards, Chris

krixvicWed Apr 07 2021

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

223 words

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Write a letter explaining water issues in your apartment

The Greeting

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

write a referral letter to an internal medicine

With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are dependent on fast foods as their main meals. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The natural resources such as oil, forests, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve this problems ?

explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment what can governments do to address these problems